Thursday, December 3, 2009

Wixth Chapter 1 this time in first person

Wixth chapter 1

 

Nobody knew exactly when it had started. It was just that, as long as everyone could remember, Vampires had ruled the world.

I grew up in Rome, not exactly a small town, and I had led a relatively good life. As a child everyone had called me "angel" (although my name, Daray, was practically the opposite). Always commenting on my eyes and my hair. Everyone seemed to love me, and they always said I would grow up to do great things. They had no idea.

    The vampires were always a bit of a thing for me. When I was younger, I admired them so much. Then as I grew older, I realized just what they were doing to people. Like I said, no one knows exactly how they came to rule the world, but one day, the three ancients, Romulus, Sun Tzu, and Attila the Hun (some people call them Quirinus, Chang Quin, and Atli) just announced their existence, and it was almost as if people just handed over power. As I grew older I began to realize what that had done to people. No one believed in vampires, and if so they thought that they were just a small, hidden, weak group.

    When the Ancients took over the world, it drove people mad. So many people were sent to the manicomio (a Roman insane asylum), it would make your head spin. I decided to work there, to help out. Just to see what I could do. I tried so hard, but sometimes I couldn't do much.

    The manicomio was, admittedly, rather spooky. It had dark grey brick walls and all the plants in its "garden" were decaying, dead, or dying. It tended to keep people away.

    Then one day, it seemed like any regular day, they brought in a new man. He seemed different from the other patients. Not only was he one of the worst cases I had ever seemed, but something seemed rather familiar about him. However, when they brought him in screaming desperately, and thrashing against his restraints, trying so hard to bite anyone or anything that went near his mouth, I quickly dismissed the idea and helped out.

    The doctors told us that he had been found horribly injured - a gash in his forehead, several broken ribs, and a broken arm – in an alleyway in the city. Once he had recovered, physically at least, in the hospital, he started talking about people chasing him. Being as full as they were, and how all his injuries were gone (not even a scar), they decided to bring him to our manicomio. They said his name was Rendor.

    I was sitting, keeping an eye on him as the doctor had told me to do, by his bed one night watching him sleep. He was restless, and talked a lot in his sleep. But when he started to talk about Romulus, Sun Tzu, and Attila I was terrified. I wanted to calm him down, maybe so I would be able to ask why he was talking about them, so I reached towards his hand.

    As soon as I touched him his eyes opened wide. He looked at me…it seemed almost in recognition, and he whispered something. I leaned down towards his odd, almost surreal looking face and he said it again.

    "Save me… Angel." Suddenly an electric shock ran up my arm and I saw a flash of white, then black as I fainted.

The next thing I knew I was opening my eyes to plain blue walls and the sounds of medical equipment. Someone must have moved me to the infirmary. I listened and heard voices outside my door.

"What happened to her?"

"Our doctors aren't sure. She seems perfectly healthy! But it is very weird just a few seconds before that man- …." The voices faded away as they walked off down the hall.

Had something happened to Rendor? Why had he seemed so familiar? Why in the world had I fainted? I questioned myself as I sat up and looked in the mirror next to my bed.

As soon as I saw my reflection I froze. What had happened to me? My eyes were blue…but now they were a beautiful purple? It was almost as if I had become a… no I thought. I grimaced at my reflection and almost fainted again when I saw my teeth. I had two pairs of fangs. I, Angel, no, Daray, had turned into a vampire.

~*~

Quirinus snapped his head up to look at Leonardo Da Vinci. "What did you say?" He asked menacingly.

"I said" stated Leonardo "that our scientists may have been successful in the experiment. They may have found a new way to create vampires. Unfortunately there a few…problems with it."

"What are the problems?"

"Well, it needs a relatively powerful vampire-"

"That shouldn't be a problem for us." Quirinus cut him off.

"-it also…kills the vampire that does it."

Quirinus cringed inwardly when he heard that. "…Well, that's a bit more problematic. What exactly is the theory?"

Leonardo read off of a paper "The vampire must be dying, and must have physical, and eye contact with the human. Then, as a dying effort to… continue living, they push their vampire 'entity' into the human, thereby creating a new vampire. They don't know if it will work though. So far it's only a theory."

"Not one that I believe we will have to test" Said Quirinus after a moments thought. "What would be the point in killing one vampire, only to create another, probably weaker one?"

The conversation was over and Quirinus dismissed Leonardo after whispering one more thing in his ear "let's not tell anyone about this little theory shall we? And that does include Chang Quin and Atli. Especially Atli." Leonardo nodded hesitantly and left.

~*~

I was astounded and absolutely terrified. How could I possibly have become a vampire? I haven't remembered my dreams for months! Wasn't that the only way to create vampires? I was also so confused by my purple eyes. I knew, like everyone did, that when a human changed their eyes would changed, but no vampire I had ever heard of had purple eyes. Actually… there was one. But I'd only heard of it once.

    She thought back to that time…

 

"Ever heard about the True Ancient?" the bartender murmured, nudging me.

    "The True Ancient?" I had asked.

    "Oh come on now! The only female vampire! They say even the ancients are afraid of her! Imagine it! I've heard she has purple eyes and is even stronger than Attila the Hun, smarter that Romulus, and more calculating than Sun Tzu! The most powerful vampire in the world!" claimed the bartender in reverence.

"But I thought that the ancients didn't make female vampires?" I had asked, bemused.

"Oh aye, they don't. But she's the true ancient! The first vampire!"

    "That's not what I heard!" yelled out another customer "I heard that she was actually a time traveler! That she went back in time to create Romulus because she knew that if she didn't, she would never be able to exist! I heard that the Ancients don't make women vampires because they're afraid that if they do they'll accidentally create her, and she'll come and kill them!"

    I left them then, thinking skeptically as the bartender and customer continued their heated argument.

 

    Suddenly I remembered where I had met Rendor before. He had been the customer that knew about the True Ancient. I thought back to the moment before I passed out and realized something. When Rendor had opened his eyes they had been sparkly and surreal... and when he had opened his mouth to speak I realized that he had had two sets of fangs. Just like I now did.

    Rendor had been a vampire. Was it possible that there was another way to create vampires? Had Rendor been the one that had turned me into a vampire? If he was a vampire than why had he died? I didn't know… but I needed to find out.

~*~

    "Sir! Update on Rendor Josephson!" Exclaimed Julius Caesar.

    "Yes? What is it? Did you catch him yet?" asked Chang Quin (also known as Sun Tzu, one of the ancients), the leader of the vampire military.

    "Well… not exactly sir. He… he got away…" Caesar said, looking worried.

    He had good reason to be worried, Chang Quin was famous for his temper, and was furious. "What? You let him get away?"

    "I'm very sorry sir! We did all we could!" He begged as Chang Quin banged his hand on the table and shot up, walking towards him. "But there is good news sir!"

    He stopped his advance at Caesar and leaned back against the table "good news?"

    "Yes sir! We have just learned that Josephson has died!" Caesar was now talking rapidly "we're not sure exactly how but we know that died on the 15th of December, year 1215 at approximately 12:15 pm CET in of the Roman manicomio."

    "Excellent, excellent. Find out which one, and exactly how he died as soon as you can." Chang Quin said, seeming to calm down a bit. "And is there any news from our scientists about the experiment?"

    Julius hesitated for a moment, remembering the threat he'd heard about from Leonardo "No news yet sir."

THE END OF CHAPTER 1

Tuesday, August 25, 2009

the complete Wixth chapter 1

Wixth

The world had fallen into dark times; the vampire ancients ruled the world and the thought of not only vampires actually existed but also that they were actually strong enough to rule the world drove many people to madness. Daray was a nurse at the Roman manicomio (asylum). With it’s dark, grey, brick walls and dead plants it tended to keep people away. She tried to help as many people as she could, but sometimes there simply wasn't much she could do for them.

It seemed like any regular day at the asylum when a new patient came in. Somehow he seemed different from the others. Not only was he one of the worst cases she'd ever seen, but he also seemed rather familiar. When they brought him in he was screaming and desperately thrashing against his restraints, trying to bite anyone who got near his mouth.

The doctors said that they had found him horribly beat up on a city street; he had a huge gash in his forehead, several broken ribs, and both his arms had multiple fractures. Once he had physically recovered from his brutal beating in the hospital (a miraculously fast recovery), he started talking in his sleep about somebody chasing him with dogs and they had took him to the asylum. The hospital attendants had said that according to his id, his name was Rendor

Daray was sitting next to his bed, watching him sleep. He started moving around, mumbling about Quirinus, Atli, and Chang Quin (otherwise known as Romulus, Sun Tzu, and Attila the Hun). Daray was instantly terrified because she knew that these were the three vampire ancients that ruled the world with cruelty. She gently reached towards his hand.

He opened his eyes wide as soon as she took his hand. He looked up at her in recognition and whispered something. She leaned her head towards his odd, almost surreal face and he said it again.

"Angel...save me." An electric shock ran up Daray’s arm and she saw a flash of white as the shock ran through her body.

The next thing she knew, she was opening her eyes to plain blue walls and the sounds of medical equipment. Someone had moved her to one of the beds in the infirmary at the manicomio. She listened and heard voices outside her door.

"What happened to her?"

"Our doctors aren’t sure. She seems perfectly healthy! It is, however, very weird that she fainted just a few seconds before that man..." the voices faded away as the men walked down the hall.

Had something happened to Rendor? Why had he seemed so familiar? Why had she fainted? She questioned herself as she sat up and looked in the mirror next to her bed.

As soon as she saw her reflection, she froze. What had happened to her? Her eyes were blue! But now they were a sparkly purple! It was almost as if she were a.... no ... she grimaced at her reflection and almost fainted again at what she saw. She had two pairs of fangs. Daray had turned into a vampire

~*~

Quirinus snapped his head up to look at Leonardo Da Vinci. "What did you say?" he asked menacingly.

"I said,” stated Leonardo "that out scientists may have bee successful in the experiment. They may have found another way to create vampires. Unfortunately, there are … a few problems with it."

"What are the problems?"

"Well, it needs a relatively powerful vampire-"

"That shouldn't be a problem for us" Quirinus cut him off.

"-it also … seems to kills the vampire that does it."

Quirinus cringed inwardly when he heard that "...Well, that's a bit more problematic. What exactly is the theory?"

Leonardo read off of a paper "The vampire has to be dying, and must have eye contact with the human. Then, as a dying effort to continue living, they push their vampire ‘entity’ into the human, thereby creating a new vampire. So far it's only a theory though."

"Not one that that I believe we have to test" said Quirinus after a moments thought. "What would the point be in killing one vampire only to create another, probably weaker one?"

The conversation was over and Quirinus dismissed Leonardo after whispering one more thing into his ear "Let's not tell anyone about this little theory, shall we? And that includes Atli and Chang Quin" Leonardo nodded hesitantly and left.

~*~

Daray was panicking. How could she possibly have become a vampire? She hadn't had any dreams for months! That was the only way vampires were created! Wasn’t it? Another excellent question was why she had purple eyes. She knew that human’s eyes changed when they became vampires but she'd never seen a vampire with purple eyes. She'd only ever heard of one, in rumors and whispers

She thought back to one such rumor she'd heard...

"Ever heard about that true ancient?" murmured the bartender, nudging her.

"The true ancient?" she had asked.

"The only female vampire! They say even the ancients are afraid of her! Imagine it! I've heard she has purple eyes and is stronger than Atilla the Hun, smarter than Romulus, and more calculating than Sun Tzu! The most powerful vampire in the world!" claimed the bartender in reverence.

"But I thought that the ancients didn't make female vampires?" She asked, confused.

"Oh aye, they don't. But she's the true ancient! The first vampire!"

"That's not what I heard!" yelled out another customer "I heard that she was actually a time traveler and went back in time to create Romulus because she knew that if she didn't, she would never exist! I heard that the ancients don't make women vampires because they're afraid that if they do they'll create her and she'll kill them!"

Daray left then, thinking rather skeptically as the bartender and customer continued they’re heated argument.

Suddenly she remembered where she had met Rendor before. He had been the customer whom had known about the True Ancient. She thought back to the moment before she had passed out and realized something. When Rendor had opened his eyes, they had been sparkly and surreal, and when he had opened his mouth to speak she realized that he had had to sets of fangs.

Rendor had been a vampire. Was it possible that there was another way to create vampires? Had Rendor been the one that had turned her into a vampire? If he was a vampire how had he died? She didn't know, but she did know that she needed to find out.

~*~

“Sir! Update on Rendor Josephson!” exclaimed Julius Caesar.

“Yes? What is it? Did you catch him yet?” asked Chang Quin (one of the ancients), the leader of their military.

“Well…not exactly sir. He… he got away…sir” Caesar said, looking worried.

He had good reason to be worried, Chang Quin was famous for his temper, and he was furious “What? You let him get away?”

“I’m very sorry sir! We did all we could!” He begged as Chang Quin banged his hand on the table and shot up, walking towards him. “But there is good news sir!”

He stopped his advance at Caesar and leaned back against the table “good news?”

“Yes sir! We have just learned that Josephson has died!” Caesar was now talking rapidly “we’re not sure exactly how but we know that he died on the 15th of December 1215 at 12:15 pm CET in the roman manicomio.”

“Excellent, excellent. Find out which one, and how exactly he died as soon as you can.” Chang Quin said, as he seeming to calm down a bit. “And is there any news from our scientists about the experiment?

Julius hesitated for a moment, remembering the threat he’d heard about from Leonardo “No news yet sir.”

Monday, August 24, 2009

fangs

I Just realized that I never clarified something: My vampires do have fangs. Not big ones though. They're on the canine teeth on the top and bottom. The ones on the bottom are the poisonous ones, the ones on top aren't. So if they want to bite someone or something without killing them they cover their bottom fangs and bite them only witt the top ones.

Sunday, August 23, 2009

I did some writing

Daray was a nurse. The world had fallen into dark times, the ancients ruled the world and that drove people to madness. Daray tried to help them as much as she could, but sometimes there simply wasn't much she could do.
It seemed like any regular day at the asylum when a new patient came in. He didn't seem special, but somehow he seemed different from the others. Not only was he one of the worst cases she'd ever seen, but he seemed rather familiar.
The doctors said that they'd found him on the street. Once he was stable and had started talking about people chasing him they had taking him to the asylum. They had said his name was Rendor
Daray was sitting next to his bed, watching him sleep. When he started moving around and mumbling about Quirinus, Chang Quin, and Atli - the three vampire leaders - she knew something was wrong and took hold of his hand.
He opened his eyes wide as soon as she took his hand. He looked up at her and whispered something. She leaned her head towards him and he said it again.
"Angel...save me." A shock ran up her arm and through her body.
The next thing she knew, she was opening her eyes to plain blue walls and medical equipment. Someone had moved her to one of the beds at the asylum. She listened and heard voices outside her door.
"What happened to her?"
"We're not sure. She seems perfectly healthy! Really, the only weird thing is taht it seems as though she fainted just a few seconds before that mad died..." the voices faded away as the men walked away.
Had Rendor died? Why had he seemed so familiar, and why had she fainted? She thought all these thoughts as she sat up and looked at the mirror next to her bed.
As soon as she saw her reflection she froze. What had happened to her? Her eyes had been blue, but now they were a sparkly purple. It was almost as if she were a .... no...she opened her mouth and almost fainted again at what she saw. She had to pairs of fangs. Daray had turned into a vampire
~~
Romulus (also known as Quirinus) snapped his head up to look at Leonardo Da Vinci. "What did you say?" he asked menacingly.
"I said" snapped back Leonardo "that out scientists may have found another way to create vampires. Unfortunately, there are a few problems with it."
"What are the problems?"
"Well, it needs a relatively powerful vampire-"
"That shouldn't be a problem for us" Quirinus cut him off.
"-it also kills the vampire that does it."
Quirinus cringed inwardly when he heard that "...Well, that's a bit more problamatic. How does it work?"
Leonardo read off of a medical paper "The vampire has to be dying, and have eye contact with a human. Then, as a dying effort to continue living, they push there vampire enitity into the human. It's only a theory though."
"Not one that that I believe we have to test" he said after a moments thought. "What would the point be in killing one vampire only to create another, probably weaker one?"
The conversation was over and Quirinus dismissed Leonardo after whispering one more thing into his ear "Let's not tell anyone about this little theory, shall we?"
~~
Daray was panicking. How could she possibly have become a vampire? She hadn't had any dreams for months! That was the only way vampires were created!
Another excellent question was why she had purple eyes. She knew that humans eyes changed when they became vampires but she'd never seen a vampire with purple eyes. She'd only ever heard of one, in whispers and rumors.
She thought back to one of the rumours she'd heard...
"Ever heard about that true ancient?" asked the bartender.
"The true ancient?" she had asked.
"They say even the ancients are afraid of her! Imagine it! The only female vampire! I've heard she has purple eyes and is stronger than Atilla the Hun, smarter than Romulus, and more calculating than Sun Tzu! The most powerful vampire in the world!" claimed the bartender in reverance.
"I thought the ancients didn't make female vampires?" She asked, confused.
"Oh aye, they don't. But she was she's the true ancient! The first vampire!"
"That's not what I heard!" yelled out another customer "I heard that she was actually a time traveller and went back in time to create Romulus becuase she knew that if she didn't, she would never exist! I heard that the ancients don't make female vampires becuase they're afraid that if they do they'll create her and she'll kill them!"
Daray left then, thinking rather skeptical thoughts, as the bartender and customer got into a heated argument.
Suddenly she remembered where she had met Randor before. He had been the customer that knew about the true ancient. She thought back to the moment before she had passed out and realized something. When Randor had opened his eyes, they had been sparkly and surreal, and when he had opened his mouth he had to sets of fangs.
Rendor had been a vampire. Was it possible that there was another way to create vampires? Had Randor been the one that had turned her into a vampire? She didn't know, but she knew that she needed to find out.

temporary name

the true ancients (temporary) name is Daray. It means dark, and was originated in America.

What the first paragraph of the book would be (maybe)

She hated herself. She hated what she had become. She knew she was the only one of her kind, and she hated it. She knew what she had to do. She needed to create more.

villian?

The true ancient fell for a human man. Completely head-over-heels in love with him. Would do anything for him. Including turning her into a vampire. Not just a regular vampire either, but one like her. A much more powerful one. However, power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely, and he became absolutely corrupted. So corrupted that he started one of the worst epidemics of all time. He created the bubonic plague.
If I were introduce him in a book, here's how I would do it:
He smiled at her as he snapped back the girls neck and took a leisurely drink. He looked up and smirked. She took in his cold, almost mezmerizing, black eyes as he said "I was wondering when you would show up. Want some?"

4pi-con

So I just got back from 4 pi-con (I got to be a panelist which was awsome) and I was on the "Not all Vampires Sparkle" panel, so, of course, I got some new ideas for my vampires (I also got to meet Innana Arthen which was really awsome)
the people are governed by fear. They respect the vampires but they are absolutely terrified of them
I need to figure out what the book (if I wrote it) would actually be about
Anything is a vampire as long as its a parasitic consumer (mine just drink blood for now, more on this later)
There has to be a defining enemy
and another more important one that I'll put in another post

Thursday, July 9, 2009

Hidden sect

so, as a kind of side story that would be in my book of vampires that I'm never going to write... there is a small, hidden sect of rather ancient, very powerful vampires that do not believe in the ancients. They worship the true ancient, and know that she is female. They are actually powerful enough that their leaders can also create more vampires, and they also make female vampires, but not very often. Every once in a while they try to rebel, and get almost completely obliterated, then build themselves up again in total secret.

Vampire hunters

Do exist. Usually they're actually people that knew the true ancient very well and know her story and hate all other vampires. If they aren't, they never last very long. Usually, the ones that SURVIVE are very powerful, but if they took on an ancient, they probably wouldn't last a second.

Drinking human blood vs. Animal blood

Vampires Can drink either human or animal blood, but they don't get as much blood out of animals, and it doesn't taste as good (although some vampires actually prefer the wilder taste). Most prefer human blood, but when they can't get it, they're willing to drink animal blood.

Does Turning into a vampire change their personality etc.

Sometimes it makes humans go crazy to become a vampire, sometimes it makes them a lot colder and more detached, and sometimes it doesn't do anything. They do remember their previous lives, but sometimes, when they get to old, they start to forget things. Other than the physical changes and new powers (oh, and the teeth of course), their aren't any changes when they become vampires (usually)

Wednesday, July 8, 2009

How all this backstory ties into today

somebody made an excellent point to me. She said "is your story you will never write all about the ancients and there lives and how the have interacted for forever? Or is that background tto a modern day urban fantasy of interaction between human and vampire worlds?" So, just to make it clear and such, if i ever write this book (which I doubt), it would be set in modern day. In Rome. If you read some of my early posts, I talk about the main character working in a hospital and a vampire turning her into a different kind of vampire and then she goes back in time and turns Romulus into a vampire. That is what my book would be about. Her going back in time to create the first vampire, and all of her other time adventures, and about the ancients being evil and trying to kill her becuase she's more powerful then them but at the same time with many vampires worshipping her. That is what my book would be about, a lot of the background stuff is just to kind of figure out the characters of the ancients and the council and everything so that if I do write this book I know how the characters would react to, well, everything. edit: sorry, my mistake, yes she does go back to change the ancients (the ancients changed all of the other vampires), but Romulus is still kind of the head of the ancients becuase he was the one that got everything organized.

Being Careful about where they get their blood

so, vampires technically can drink from animals, but they don't get as much blood and it is considered to be of a worse quality (although some wilder vampires actually prefer it). But, if they do something like, say, drink from a poisoned animal, then the poison will not react well to their dead body. If they drink from a sick human, they might get the illness, depending on what it is. So as long as their careful, their fine.

Is it possible to become a human again?

very simply, no. No it's not possible to become a human again once you've become a vampire.

Tuesday, January 13, 2009

New Ancient- Sun Tzu/Chang Quin

So, I have decided to make the third ancient Sun Tzu, the chinese military leader who wrote "the art of war" As per usual, here's the actual story (according to http://www.woopidoo.com/biography/sun-tzu/index.htm), although I'm not sure how accurate it actually is becuase apparently, not much information is know about him. Sun Tzu originally named Sun Wu and also called Chang Qing (what the other ancients call him), authored The Art of War in the sixth century BC. This military strategy book became one of the most influential books of war and Sun Tzu became well known as not only a military strategist but also a realist in international relations theory. There are no exact records of Sun Tzu's birth or death (he erased them). The only known records of his life were from a biography written in the 2nd century BC by a historian named Sima Qian (he tried to erase that also, but Sima managed to escape while Chang Quin was still a new vampire and weak. By the time Chang Qing found him and killed him the book was already to popular to erase). Sun Tzu is believed to have been born in 544 BC under the name Sun Wu, possibly in the state of Qi in ancient China. His family were members of the shi, an ancient class of landless aristocrats who lost their land during the Spring and Autumn Period of territorial consolidation (actually vampires attacked them, that's when he got turned into a vampire) . During Sun Tzu's time, most shi travelled as academic scholars, but Sun Tzu decided to work as a mercenary (he liked the blood). After working throughout the country, the ruling king, King Helu of Wu, hired Sun Tzu as a general in 512 BC (he used a bit of mind control on him, even though he really didn't need to). Sun Tzu consequently authored The Art of War (in all of the original copies, between all the regular lines, there are more words that can only be seen by vampires, commenting and adding more and better details on everything), which, at the time was named Sun Tzu based on the custom to name a work after its author. Sun Tzu's military strategy soon became legendary and he even proved his knowledge by training battalions of previously untrained female soldiers (a large number of whom were actually vampires). Sun Tzu gave control of each battalion to King Helu's concubines. After they disobeyed orders and laughed at him, Sun Tzu executed two of the concubines, per military law, and finished his training with a powerful team with exceptional leadership skills. At the time of Sun Tzu's generalship, the kingdom of Wu was considered a semi-barbaric state and incapable of military regulation or cultural power . After Sun Tzu took control, however, the military in Wu went on to conquer the state of Chu, the most powerful state in the Spring and Autumn Period in Chinese history (once again, vampires). After the defeat of Chu, Sun Tzu disappeared, wanting a quiet, peaceful life as opposed to one of constant conflict (yeah, with the whole drinking blood in private and everything). His teachings, however, went on to influence not only military strategies, but also martial arts in both armed and unarmed combat (do I even need to say it?). In fact, his teaching known as Bing Fa became the basis for most Asian martial arts. Historians argue that Sun Tzu's work did not advocate war but, instead, told of strategies to employ should conflict arise. In fact, according to historians, Sun Tzu's philosophies were more about how to avoid war while still maintaining control over an enemy in tight situations rather than war itself (they're wrong. It's all about fighting, and fighting vampires). Although there are no confirmations that the two met, Sun Tzu lived during the time of Confucius and may have been influenced by the man's work (or may have influenced him). It's estimated that Sun Tzu died in 496 BC in the state of Wu. (or not...) actually, he just dissapeared. And eventually joined the ancients.

Thursday, January 8, 2009

Elizabeth Bathory

www.vampires.monstrous.com/erzsebet_bathory.htm
ok....this is the full story of Elizabeth Bathory. It is unbelievably gross and nasty and terrifying and bloody, and I wouldn't suggest reading it. But if your simply that curious to find out who she was, you can read it, but I would definetly not suggest it....
edit: Reelah pointed out that the url link didn't work, but it was only a slight mispelling on my part, so I fixed it
thank's for pointing it out! :3

Tuesday, January 6, 2009

Vampire council

The vampire council are in charge, only outranked by the ancients, and simply do everything that the ancients are to busy to do. The council consists of:
  • Leonardo Da Vinci
  • Anne Boleyn
  • Dante
  • Catherine the Great (of Russia)
  • Napoleon Bonaparte
  • Miguel de Cervantes (author of Don Quixote)
  • Joseph Priestley (basiclly discovered Oxygen)
  • Charlotte Brontë (author of Jane Eyre)
  • Constantine (roman emperor)
  • Julius Caeser
  • Sequoyah (invented the cherokee written language)
  • Galileo Galilei
  • and eventually I'll think of more, if you have any suggestion, just tell me

what other animals can be turned into vampires, which ones can't

If a vampire becomes attached to a creature that isn't a cat and wants to turn it into a vampire, the creature has to follow some rules:
  • it has to be unusually intellegent
  • it has to be impressive, so like an eagel or something, but nothing like, say, a toad
  • it has to be well behaved
  • it can't be a dog or anything that doesn't like cats
  • it has to behave well around other creatures
  • it has to behave well with other vampires
  • it has to be able to not interupt classes
  • etc.

Vampire cats

So as I said, there are no vampire animals, other than cats. When the true ancient was turned and she went back in time (to create romulus, remember?) to Rome, she found a cat. Now, if you've ever been to Rome (or pretty much anywhere in Italy), you will know that there are cats everywhere (mostly strays). The True Ancient found one such cat and was astounded by how smart it was. It feared her, yet boldly came up her (as cats do). Just the way it walked and acted proved how smart it was. She took care of this cat for about a week or so, but one day she got away. Just for about half an hour, but that was enough. When she found the cat again, it was near death; it had been mauled by a wolf (the same one that took care of Romulus and Remus actually; it had smelled the vampire and oversense of death on the cat and had tried to kill it). She then Just in that short week she had learned to love the cat, and managed to turn it into a vampire just before it died. She then gave the vampire cat to Romulus (shortly after turning him) and he made it a tradition from there. Every time any ancient, or even any regular vampire find a cat that they become unusually attached to, if they go to the vampire council (the vampires directly under the ancients, more on this later) and have the cat approved, then they can turn it into a vampire cat (similar with almost any other animal, but it takes a lot more to get it approved, more on this later). The vampire cats wander around the Coliseum and well, act like cats.

bathing in blood

simply has no effect. The only way that blood actually helps them is if they drink it or actually inject it into their blood stream.

vampires catching human diseases

so simple human diseases such as the cold or the flu don't affect vampires. Technically, they ARE already dead, so anything that affects the lungs, the heart, the liver, the blood, almost any organ, simply have no affect (diseases need a living host, vampires are, once again, not alive). However, diseases that affect things such as the eyes, the ears, the nose, arms, legs, hands, things like that, do affect them. If it would dim any human sense, then if a vampire gets it, it affects them 10 fold. and the brain. Any mental illness or anything that would affect a normal human brain is very very dangerous for vampires. especailly becuase their brain is their most important feature.

Vampire lessons?

Ok, so the coliseum is not just a place for the ancients to rule the world from, and not just a place for Vampire scientists, it is a vampire school, almost like a college. They teach lessons on vampire history (so for example, what famous people were truly vampires, such as Leonardo Da Vinci was a vampire. Also they teach what they usually teach in history...except the true version, more on this later), languages (more on this later), vampire biology (more on this later), human and vampire culture, vampire medicine, economics, politics, chemistry, literature, physics, math, journalism, psychology, philosophy, art, music, p.e., (more on all these classes later) pretty much everything they teach in regular college except their based on vampires instead of humans, and they're all on a higher level of intellect (vampires, on a basis, are smarter than humans).

Sucks to Be Me by Kimberly Pauley

ok, so I'm reading a new vampire book called "Sucks to be me" by Kimberly Pauley. It's about a teenage girl (of course -_-) both of whom's parents are vampires. She needs to decide whether or not she wants to be a vampire, and to do that the vampire counsel is sending her to a month of lessons about vampires (more on this later). 
At one lesson, the teacher starts telling them more about how vampires can catch human diseases (more on this later), and how they should be careful with where the blood they drink comes from (more on this later). At one point she says "And I don't want to hear about any Elizabeth Bathory copy-cats. Let me just say, once and for al, that bathing in blood has no effect whatsoever (more on this later) and will not sate your hunger (more on this later AGAIN ;-.-)." The main character then turns to the boy sitting next to her and asks who Elizabeth Bathory is. He says "Romanian Countess from the 1500s. She like to kill her chambermaids and bathe in their blood. Thought it made her look younger."
I found this very interesting, so I looked her up. Once again, I'll write more on her later, but for now, just quickly:
The main charecter of my "story," the true ancient, is the decent of Elizabeth Bathory (as I said, more on this later).