Sunday, August 23, 2009

What the first paragraph of the book would be (maybe)

She hated herself. She hated what she had become. She knew she was the only one of her kind, and she hated it. She knew what she had to do. She needed to create more.

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  1. I'm having trouble getting from "she hated herself" to "she needed to create more". Perhaps if there were the suggestion of passing time so that her need for others would overwhelm her hatred of what she had become and therefore what they would become? I'm sorry to quibble 'cause the paragraph actually reads extremely well!

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